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he drinks me in like a creamy mocha--
double shot chocolate,
making love to sugar.
his eyes on my thighs,
& lips on my hips:
my heart dancing & pounding in
iambic pentameter.
a smile,
full
of devilish love,
the picture perfect poet's dream:
a soft, swirled, murmuring blend of
sweet & spicy & bitter & sour.
every breath of his
a windfall of words go off in my head
that i don't even understand.
beautiful eyes that in me
surmise no surprise
--green like unfallen snow--
each whisper of a feeling in them
like a caressing fingertip up your spine,
i shiver & laugh
'cause
when his lips touch mine, it's...
(oh god that title took me like ten minutes to come up with.
the titles always take longer than the poems -.-)

hope you like (:

questions? ask
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pengirl100and2 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
I don't even like coffee and after this I'm craving a cup. It's beautiful, I love the similie you use. 'green like unfallen snow'.
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehe thank you (:
im not much a fan of coffee either--it needs a lot of sugar first :D
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pengirl100and2 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
ah you're very welcome :)
It does need to be very sweet before I take any. I've only had a sip or two of ice mocha once and again. :D
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i know! otherwise the bitterness of the coffee ruins it! (:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you have been featured here!
i would really appreciate it if you could give some love to the other features and :+fav: the journal! :heart:
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ohgosh thank you (:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're very welcome (:
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Kymira12 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!

This lovely deviation has been featured in my Journal!!! [link] . If you have time, can you come and check it out please and support all of the other deviants featured? :D

P.S If you would like me to remove it, just send me a note please :hug:
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! (:
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Kymira12 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! :D
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rose-from-the-ashes Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful and vivid... love the imagery ! featured in my journal :heart: [link]
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ohgod wow. Thank you so much (:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Love your use of imagery, internal rhyme and alliteration. First line of this immediately caught my attention, and the rest completely paid off my curiosity.
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much (:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
You're welcome.
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back-from-dah-DEAD Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
you are probably my favorite person ever.
AND I FUCKING HATE TITLES -soifurthermystalkerishloveforyou-

i enjoy the iambic pentameter line lolol

it's all just sweet and cute and fluffy and wonderful.



--unfallen snow is green?
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha xD
thankyou, thankyou.

and yayayayayayay.

and think about it: grass is green.
if the snow hasn't fallen yet,
the grass is still green, no?
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back-from-dah-DEAD Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
i'm probably the singly most obnoxious fan, ever.

i recently did a poetry unit and think iambic pentameter can suck a dick
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i'd rather have an obnoxious one than none, darling ;p

and i know.
i know.
but the words sound pretty.
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back-from-dah-DEAD Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Awwwww, I'm appreciated!

I knoooow, fucking fuck.
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yesindeeeeeed.

fucking
fuckity
titty fuck
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back-from-dah-DEAD Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
I haven't seen my mom in a while... So I can over and I was like...
Fucking shit, school's been shitty ass shit.
Iloveswears. She just looks at me like whoabro. But she never stops it, it's wonderful.
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
school is school.
seven cruel hours of our lives.

and swears are awesome
it's a bad habit of mine
cuz sometimes i'll curse when little kids are about
but like
most of the time
im like
idontgiveashitbro.
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LionessAmaya Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
this is beautiful. :)
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you (:
wrote it madly and desperately at midnight around two weeks ago xD
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Sonicfan170 Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very unique way of describing love making ;) Love it :D
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehe, thanks ;)

:p
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