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he drinks me in like a creamy mocha--
double shot chocolate,
making love to sugar.
his eyes on my thighs,
& lips on my hips:
my heart dancing & pounding in
iambic pentameter.
a smile,
full
of devilish love,
the picture perfect poet's dream:
a soft, swirled, murmuring blend of
sweet & spicy & bitter & sour.
every breath of his
a windfall of words go off in my head
that i don't even understand.
beautiful eyes that in me
surmise no surprise
--green like unfallen snow--
each whisper of a feeling in them
like a caressing fingertip up your spine,
i shiver & laugh
'cause
when his lips touch mine, it's...
(oh god that title took me like ten minutes to come up with.
the titles always take longer than the poems -.-)

hope you like (:

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pengirl100and2 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
I don't even like coffee and after this I'm craving a cup. It's beautiful, I love the similie you use. 'green like unfallen snow'.
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehe thank you (:
im not much a fan of coffee either--it needs a lot of sugar first :D
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pengirl100and2 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012   Writer
ah you're very welcome :)
It does need to be very sweet before I take any. I've only had a sip or two of ice mocha once and again. :D
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i know! otherwise the bitterness of the coffee ruins it! (:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you have been featured here!
i would really appreciate it if you could give some love to the other features and :+fav: the journal! :heart:
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ohgosh thank you (:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're very welcome (:
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Kymira12 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!

This lovely deviation has been featured in my Journal!!! [link] . If you have time, can you come and check it out please and support all of the other deviants featured? :D

P.S If you would like me to remove it, just send me a note please :hug:
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Felka-wolf Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! (:
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Kymira12 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! :D
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